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Misfit Laments

This is part of Misfit Island were misfits can post their poems, stories, or whatever and get positive feedback ^_^

Just a few things to remember-

-If you didn't write the poem, please state who did.
-If you did write the poem and you're feeling shy and bashful (awww...) you don't have to leave your name or username.
-Thank you, and enjoy!

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See The Art In Me

-written while i was in iraq.
-Hate, love, death, life, the Cauldron boiling fire in ice framed melting water; Into the depth of wisdom from the depth of desire, come life of hate, and death of love; and angel's bloodied by the faith of demons who took control of hell on earth; While Heavens gate boil in blood of he who came but did not live to see his vision of a paradistic world; All turned disheveled, in the pits of fire, where angel's sing to the one true liar; A world of love full of mortal life, what better vision from a God, a father; With nothing to satisfy us but the blood we gather; Our mother Eve, before the Angel's kneels, buying her way, such things she makes him feel; Into a whole new world such things are for real; But Eden's forbidden for the things we'll steal. Knowledge is power our father forbids, but who is to tell us our don'ts and our dids; Our mother is kneeling for pleasure she gives, such angel's God set, for the life that he lives; The angel God set to guard Eden's door, forgets his true duty for our mother the whore; When he takes her new gates open wide, in sin they go running, but naked they'll hide; The father that failed us knows well what goes on, but because he has failed us, he's lost well gone, done; Who left to brave the wonders of Hell and the evils of Heaven, will Satan or Lucifer take a plunge at the seven? In mystery they're clouded, in numbers they set, if God couldn't help us then Satan forget.

By: LCpl Burgos, Frank
USMC 03/05/27

By:[polaroid of purity]

Fragile Winter
We dreamed like children,
Innocence so sweet,
unknowing of the cold,
winter surely brings,
watch the patterns the sun may play
while winter takes the life away
Prayers go unheard,
only for today
someday your trust will slowy fade
to gray, like the sky, winter brings
a song of melancholy, the children will sing.

The best poem [Toffee-Thief] is capable of:(Completed and moved from main room)

There once was a cheese-puff named Bob;
He was cheesy and shaped like a blob.
He fit in so well,
I'm sorry to tell,
That he's rather a terrible snob.

*bows* Thank you very much...

*round of applause eminates from corner of room StickyBun inhabits*

What's that noise?? *shrieks and runs from room*

(The tragic story of a true misfit)

Under the Roses~

Vines cover her shame
Her face, the leaves' still frame
A part of the Earth, like a charming stain
She will lay forever, but not in vain
Her heart, the green hath claim
Forget what wretched name!
Her misery and love were slain
She smiles as she embraces the rain
Amoung the thorns, grows her fame
Under the roses, her fears are tame
On the ground she does remain
The once-lonely girl and the Earth's forgotten pain
.. Beautiful...the same

by: [ludageke]

2004-03-29 [StickyBun]: i dont...i always get in fights with myself, and then i hurt my own feelings...

2004-03-30 [polaroid of purity]: *pats* It's okay, we all have problems...*cough*

2004-03-30 [StickyBun]: *punches self in the gut* thats what you get for talkin bout my momma!

2004-03-30 [Zainal]: and then... on the moon... no moon... there is to a moon!... nope no moon... moon!... go look... no moon... hmmm... moon!... no moon.... i give up... your stupid... *shock*!

2004-03-30 [StickyBun]: ...?

2004-03-30 [polaroid of purity]: *pats* Don't worry Chris, you weren't talking about your momma. *cough* By the way, I like your mood. I love the Smashing Pumpkins. ^_^

2004-03-31 [StickyBun]: hehe, this is the first mood im getting responses to. alot of smashing pumpkins fans out there i guess :P

2004-03-31 [Zainal]: hey will you look at that thier is a moon... told ya... well excuse me fer not knowing... how could you not know... you kept me locked up... where... in your mind... does that mean you dont excist... i do to... nope... who do you think is in control right now?... *d'ope!*

2004-03-31 [polaroid of purity]: Yeah, I love the Smashing Pumpkins...especially "Disarm"...good stuff. And are you okay, Zainal?

2004-03-31 [StickyBun]: he's caught up in the moon :/

2004-03-31 [polaroid of purity]: Oh. Of course....

2004-04-01 [Zainal]: help have diff personality in conrol... shut up moron!... hey you happen to be... i said shut up!... okay you dont have to get violent... dont make... you'll only hurt yourself... damn!... haha! i am good!.... you still wont get help... d'ope!

2004-04-01 [StickyBun]: *eats popcorn* this is more confusing than the matrix...

2004-04-01 [Zainal]: *goes frlying through the room and hits wall* i told you you couldnt do it... how was i suppose to know?... cause i cant do... what does that have to do with it... casue i am you and you are me... so?... so if i cant, you cant either... well i had to make sure... will just leave me alone now?... nope...damn you!

2004-04-01 [polaroid of purity]: *munches on popcorn* Should we help him? *watches Frankie run into a wall* Nah...too entertaining...

2004-04-01 [StickyBun]: hehe hes fine

2004-04-01 [Zainal]: *stands up and shakes head* wow... i my owm person again... *fist hits face* you only wish!... oh yea, i can dogde bullents watch.... hey what are you doing?... one bullet.... no your going to kill us.... two.... *trips and barly misses thirs bullet* ... you moron!... oh, thanks!.... thats it i'm leaving your to wierd fer my taste.... sniff, no body loves me, not even my alter ego, how sad....

2004-04-01 [StickyBun]: *pats Zainal on the back* hehe im pretty sure SOMEBODY luvs you....*walks away whistling* hehe just kiddin, i luv ya pal.

2004-04-01 [polaroid of purity]: I wuv you too! You're a little insane, but that's kinda cool...

2004-04-01 [Zainal]: little.. i not little! *puffs chest out*

2004-04-01 [polaroid of purity]: Sure! ^_^

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